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Dahil boring ang Eco102.
Riposte*, I cannot
The wind blew softly
and it brought me
the fragrance of mountains
and freshly-cut grass.
When it stopped, all that's left
was the scent of Lysol
stuck in my fencing mask,
inviting my brain to surrender my soul
to the boy who intended to hurt me
with his bent blade.
A lefty he is, and I was pleased
with the way he twirled
his foil with mine
and with the pain I felt as he thrust
it just above my chest.
Careless, I was.
But all I could think of was his gaze -
pointed directly at me -
and the too many fragile points
on my body
that the breast plate,
the mask, and the fencing jacket
could not hide.
January 2009 (edited August 14, 2009)
*Riposte - a fencing term. An attack with right-of-way following a valid parry. A simple (or direct) riposte goes straight from the parry position to the target. A riposte may attack in any line. Consider its equivalent in a conversation. (from here)
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The overpowering scent of Lysol stuck in my mask –
your hot breath on a Makahiya.
parang droga :))
"your hot breath on a Makahiya."
the shet, pepito. nakaka-high :))
ahmmmmm :)
And I am left thinking. Means... -jc
Nakasabit ako sa komento mo, jc.
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